Only You ~*~Awarded by Sasha~*~
It's only you, will always be my minds eye calls the dream once more, I stand and close my core to see horizons light some distant shore. My minds eye calls the dream once more I dance the whispers of...
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This is so beautiful, Sammie. I love the way you presented it too.
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Hello Sammie What a lush use of form, accentuating the love and passion so perfectly. Loved the rhyme, meter and flow, but more the so sentiment blooming in this form. Excellent. Hugs. Max
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thanks so much all for your kind comments on my pantoum, appreciate you all hugs &
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~ oh wow, Sammie, this is the most exquisite example of the Pantoum form that I have ever read.... it's never been a form that I have wanted to try, but after reading this one I am seriously...
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Sasha you are so kind it's a form I love but rarely find the quiet within my mind to play around with I love structured verse, but if I have to spend too much time on it's foundations I lose the soul...
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Well you haven't lost the soul with this one, my friend. It is brilliantly done. Great structure and the message flows naturally without being forced. It doesn't matter whether you put your hand to...
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I love this trilogy of feeling, love, longing. Sigh OM
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Sammie your words flow gracefully, flawless down the page. This reads beautifully out loud! It echoed of moments past... personally touching deep! LOL, Jerry
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I love the way you've made each quatrain stand alone and made them more powerful.
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tender beautiful... Samantha, this one is brilliant! ~Steve
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~ dearest Sammie, this poem has called me back several times, to read and this time I just had to leave you a little something special Congratulations on this most deserved award, dear one...you...
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Love this Sammie, truly is beautiful. love the format too. huggs
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Your gifts are numerous. This poem is so damn good I am going to have to come back again later on to dance in its grace again. thanks, andy
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WOW THANK YOU ALL I had totally forgotten this (((Sash))) thank you and all, appreciate each and all
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